Sojourn - Comments

I love this story so much!
You really nailed Sam and Dean's banter and their joking insults.
I think the whole show can actually be summed up with... "Jerk" "Bitch".



Also, the action in the second chapter was really well written.

Update soon, yeah? I want more!

I really like this.
I only watched SN series one cos I got bored but I still like it :P
But yeah, I like your choice of words and how you write it.
Good work!

I really liked reading this.
I can tell from each word, that you really put a lot effort into this, and it shows.

I'm intruiged, because honestly, this is a type of story you don't see often on Mibba.
I love how you twist so many different styles in here so that the reader doesn't ever get bored.
I think I'll subscribe! <3

I liked your summary, it drew my interest and I don't even watch supernatural. I also really liked how your narration style. I can't really say whether or not it matches the character because I don't watch the show, but I liked it. I also liked the line "The closest thing I got was an umbrella - good enough." It's funny to imagine such a spunky character using an umbrella as defense.

This is really interesting. I'm interested to see where you will go with this.

This was really, really interesting. I've never watched Supernatural, so I kind of read it as an original.

I love the banner. It's really, really great. And the layout is great. Your descriptions are really cool, and I LOVE how she named her car. It's always nice to see a female hunter, too, no matter what the prey is. :D

So far, I'm digging it. Keep up the good work!

I'm loving this.
I really like the banner, too.
And that car is one cherry ride.

I'm definitely subscribing.
Can't wait for more!
:)