Sweet Dreams Arthur - Comments

plz update!! i love your story!!

Update soon please i really like the story.

I do like the raw material of the story, but some of it should be cleaned up grammar and punctuation wise. Still, I'm impressed and I love it! :)

Gah! I love it. You should update soon (though it looks like it's been a long while).
And I agree with the above, Miles would be their father-in-law.
And a nice layout would suit the story well.

Isn't Miles Mal's father?

ITS GREAT!! update soon please?

I Absolutley Love Your Storyyy:DDD

UPDATEE

Yay! Yes it was POTC!

This is really good so far! And the quote's from POTC, right?

I like the concept. Arthur was the best character in the movie I believe. Update soon

i agree with thepeterpan, you should get a layout.
i can help you if you'd like.
if you go see my stories (you don't necessarily have to read them) you can see what kind of layouts i do :)
i love this story. arthur is dreamy. lol.
please update soon.

I like it, though you really should move the 'Legal, I do not own' stuff on the summary page instead of having it before every chapter. You should also get a new attractive layout, cause its not just the story that attracts readers ;)
You should also leave the A/N at the end of the story, instead of just putting it in paranthesis in the chapters because it conflicts with story.
I love the sex appeal between Authur and Sav, they sound like they could be a really sexy couple.
Sav has alot of self-control, I would have been ravaged Authur :D