Hm... so I stumbled across this and decided to check it out. :) It's looking very interesting already. I really like the plotline you have going for it. It's really unique. And I can't wait to see what else you have in store for it. :) Can't wait for the next update! Definitely... subscribed! :D
Hmm, interesting. I thought Joey was dead at first, not in a coma. The part with Andrew was toucching, though- although I was sad that once Joey woke up he wouldn't remember it happening. I love my younger siblings a lot so if they were to die, I'd be pissed but enjoy any time I could closer to them. Now, if I had a kid like Joey does, I'm not all too sure I'd like to go back; I'd rather stay with my brother, aha. Anyway, I like all the possibilities this has if you ever update it, that is. It seems to me that either Joey will become the opposite of what he was or become worse. Either one would be interesting, I'm sure. Then again, the world may never know. Update, babe.
This is really good. Nice to see new ideas, good description and well thought out ideas. I did spot a few mistakes, so I would read over it and fix them but other than that, bravo.
KEEP KEEP KEEP. It's amazing bby. <3 You described it beautifully. Just don't make too much of an ass out of Jordan. You know he can be retarded at times though. ;p More more more <3 Also ANDEH <3333. I loved it. =D
It's looking very interesting already. I really like the plotline you have going for it. It's really unique. And I can't wait to see what else you have in store for it. :)
Can't wait for the next update!
Definitely... subscribed! :D