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  • CourageKeeper

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    I'm crying so much you don't even know.
    This is was so so so so so damn good.
    December 12th, 2012 at 10:52pm
  • rosetta.

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    Oh dear! Poor, poor Matt! D: I really can't wait to see him ninja-kick Kirsten's butt! >.< He should totally. Oh, and totally get back with Mia.
    September 6th, 2010 at 10:37am
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    Noooooooooooooooooooooo.
    So saddddd.
    Poor, poor Mia! Please make something happy happen?!
    August 30th, 2010 at 10:24am
  • fuuyeahEva

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    Love your story!
    August 12th, 2010 at 07:06am
  • rosetta.

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    Holy cow. That was unexpected!
    August 10th, 2010 at 04:10am
  • rosetta.

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    OMG. I LOVE THIS.
    August 6th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • xmydecemberx

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    I finally got around to reading this. Sorry :(. Okay well I really like this because it seems cliche at first but I am assuming you are going turn it around :). Now, what you could try to do is to add bits of detail here and there and start sentences with different words instead of starting three sentences with the same word. It gives it more flare. But other than that this is a wonderful story with great characters and a very awesome layout ;).
    July 25th, 2010 at 10:15pm