this is really good. there's a couple things that weren't the best, but overall, it was awesome. one thing that stucks out for me though, is that you use the word "of" a lot when you should use "have". like 'should of' and 'should have' i like how you incorperated a band deal in there, because i'm a sucker for band stories, even if they're not fan-fics.
July 26th, 2010 at 04:29am
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one thing that stucks out for me though, is that you use the word "of" a lot when you should use "have". like 'should of' and 'should have'
i like how you incorperated a band deal in there, because i'm a sucker for band stories, even if they're not fan-fics.