This is a really awesome story. I always want to hear more about Rory and Amy's childhood and this is just perfect. And the ending was sweet too. Keep up the spectacular writing!
This was so adorable. I always admire writers who can write accurate children's characters and, not only did you do that, but you also captured Amy's personality perfectly at the same time. Everything about this was just so sweet, from Rory wearing the nurse's outfit to that fight. xD Overall, this was just... perfect. There's absolutely no way I could criticize this, so well done. (:
I really, really love this story! You’ve nailed the characters spot-on, Amy especially. She’s wonderfully fiery and sulky and headstrong, even when she’s only a little girl. Rory is awkward and, well, Rory-ish, and I just love him, in that way that makes me want to cringe and give him a hug at the same time. I especially think you did well with Jeff, who was never really fleshed out in the show, so usually when he shows up in Rory/Amy fics he’s quite flat, but in yours he’s a real CHARACTER, with feelings and a background and… it’s just wonderful!
I seriously love your Doctor Who works. Seriously.
I wish I could write a massive dissertation on how brilliant this is, but I'm not that loquacious, so I'll stick with telling you that this is amazingly lovely :)