This was interesting and just a tad confusing. You have good description, not too much and not too little which is hard to find a happy medium sometimes.
"Peter unlocks the door and opens it for Lady Con. Lady Con walks out with Peter following her and shuts the door." Instead of putting "Lady Con" right away again, put "she". You did this a lot and it looses the reader. Use...pronouns(I think that's what they're called. :)) a little more. They help the story flow.
That's all I can think of. Otherwise, it was good. It just needs a little work. :)
"Peter unlocks the door and opens it for Lady Con. Lady Con walks out with Peter following her and shuts the door."
Instead of putting "Lady Con" right away again, put "she". You did this a lot and it looses the reader. Use...pronouns(I think that's what they're called. :)) a little more. They help the story flow.
That's all I can think of. Otherwise, it was good. It just needs a little work. :)