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  • Bottled Hollywood

    Bottled Hollywood (155)

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    Usually, I don't like cutting stories, but this one was just so enticing that I have to say I liked it.
    It was so much in so little; the way you described her cutting was almost painful for me, as if she was slicing my wrist.
    The whole thing just flowed wonderfully and was written flawlessly.
    August 8th, 2010 at 08:00am
  • T0ast.

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    This a very powerful, dark, yet meaningful piece. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was very descriptive, and really nailed down the meaning of the word throughout it. I loved how original it was, and it didn't touch the topic of romance like most stories nowadays. It was dark and evil, just how it was meant.
    It was great, and I loved it. Thanks for your entry! :D
    July 23rd, 2010 at 10:57pm