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  • die Bienen Knie

    die Bienen Knie (150)

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    OMG NO! this was more than 500 words!!! Haha no, I don't care.
    Your layout is beautiful, but I think it's too bright for the tone of this story...
    The story itself was good, I thought he was dead for a while when it got to the light part.
    July 30th, 2010 at 02:04am
  • Jupiter's Census.

    Jupiter's Census. (100)

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    Intriguing. Moreee.
    July 24th, 2010 at 12:46am
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