Stay With Me - Comments

Definitely make a sequel! I've been reading this from the beginning and love it!
I'm sorry I haven't commented before this, I've been very busy this summer but I've always tried to make time for this story.
I would most certainly read the sequel!

So cute,
you should def. make a sequal.
I REALLY want to know who raped her.
And I disagree with the people who say it's too fast paced.
What ever happend with them moving out together... next story idea? >:D

Yay to sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for the first chapter of that xoxo

OMG u are so mean leaving it there!

Who the hell is raping her?

And WTF happened to Jason and the gang?

Awesome update more soon plz xoxo

WTF. the story sucks its the worst thing I've ever read.

This story is so cute. AAAAH. omg :3

I.. uhm, don't know what to say. I really like. And I love the way you're writing. : >

I like this.
It's going pretty fast, he's moving quick.
But you can tell that they've liked each other FOREVER, so it's cool.
I actually like how you didn't go into all the ridiculous details of friends, appearance classes.
One of the things that turns me off to a story is:

"I looked at my schedule, Math, Science, English, lunch, Photography, Drama, History, free period."

or

"My friends giggled launching themselves down the hall at me. My friends were so weird! Always laughinh!" BLAH BLAH BLAH
I'm such a cynic. I like it. Mention everything in a relaxed manor like you already did.

I don't mean to pick fights. I only voice my opinion.

AND IT'S NOT PORN

You're rushing pretty fast. :S
Try slowing it down. It seems like if you go this fast-paced your story will end in no time. Give some information about the things around her. Her friends, the classes she's been in, what she'll be doing at home, things like that.
I like the summary though, it seems intresting. :)