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  • TortureOfImagination

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    love this story first off second you keep sayin plz dont hate me before the party chapter so yeah just lettin you know i dont lolz tho as for jason well i would explain what id like to do to him but id prolly get banned xD so yeah lets just say i hate him very much!!! but again LOVE THE STORY!=D.... and tht smiley cuz if you look at it right tiz also a mushroom xD weird observations for the win!
    July 31st, 2011 at 09:16am
  • notrelevant

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    :D i just finished reading this, and i'm off to read the sequel!!
    this is soooo awesome!! and this'll probably sound a little strange, but i like how much sex you put in here xD
    September 15th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • MeeSheeMuhFFin

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    *waves finger at you* xD...
    You know those stories that are SO freaking high, and like, have a lot of commenters and subscribers, and all that stuff?
    And, have you ever said to yourself, "Baah, this story is going to be AWFUL. I bet they can't even write a decent sentence."
    I read the first chapter.
    And then I said... "Oh my God.
    This is my new favorite author". xD You're on my list of favorite authors now<3! Since you're just that cool.
    And, you know, stuff :D
    I might not comment a lot on this, because the story is finished, but I will sure as hell comment on the sequal, when I catch up to it!
    Believe me, it's a warning xD
    September 6th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • Slow Down Sisky

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    I just found this story, unfortunately. I'm so behind!
    I'm only only chapter 9, but I love it(:
    Anyway, I saw in an author's note something about seeing NSN and You Me at Six at Warped in Atlanta.
    I live in Atlanta, and I was in the crowd for YM@6. Just thought it was crazy I was that close to you XD I was in the middle with all those assholes that thought it was cool to mosh.
    And then at the end, when it was raining and people were booing NSN and chanting "four year strong", it fucking sucked. I bitched out a lot of people(:
    September 1st, 2010 at 08:06am
  • TimeStopsHere

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    Love this story. A lot :)
    I'm very far behind on commenting for this chapter..
    But in 19 you asked if anyone else liked Degrassi; I do, for sure. Favorite show.
    And I agree about having Eli's babies.
    I'd kidnap him and lock him in my basement, he's that sexy.
    just sayin :P
    August 22nd, 2010 at 01:30am
  • reader11224

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    Omg. Just finished. *crys* time 2 read sequal
    August 11th, 2010 at 06:27am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    O.O so this is what I missed
    August 7th, 2010 at 09:22am
  • miss monti

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    I fucking love this so much.
    kldfhalskdfjh.
    I just can't even explain how amazing it is.
    I just can't even.
    *Goes off to start reading the sequel*
    <3333333333
    August 7th, 2010 at 04:53am
  • livelaughloveSING566

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    that was so sad, but I'm glad that Lulu got a reality check! at least it wasn'y his virginity, and now he won't even think about trusting that terrible person again!!!! i can't wait for the sequel!!
    August 7th, 2010 at 03:21am
  • loveislouder

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    I literally almost cried reading this. UGH why must you be such an amazing writer?! But seriously, I love this, soo sad it's over, SO FREAKING GLAD there's a sequel!
    August 7th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • nikkisixxsicles

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    Ahem, okay... a random thing I had to say:
    When I read that he liked soft things way back in the story, I automatically thought.
    Imagine him on ecstasy... oh my god... he'd love it XD
    But anyways... loved the story, hated the ending D: Poor lulu, poor nicky!
    August 6th, 2010 at 11:27pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    IT'S THAT ASSHAT.
    D:<
    -Runs Off To Read Sequel-
    August 6th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • confession

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    Nrghh, loved the story.
    At the end of forty-six, the last line sounds a bit like the start of Fireworks by You Me At Six.
    'So this is the end of you and me, we had a good run but I'm setting you free to do as you want, to do as you please, without me.'
    I dunno, I just thought you should know. x3
    August 6th, 2010 at 01:28pm
  • nikkisixxsicles

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    D':
    No!
    ..NO!
    *reads sequel*
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:00pm
  • ImmaEnforcer

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    Amazing story. I hated Jason. Gonna go check out the sequel!
    August 6th, 2010 at 08:50am
  • boyking

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    BEST. STORY. EVER.
    Sorry, I just had to get that out.
    I'm so happy there's a sequel, you don't even know. (:

    I loved this story, and you did an amazing job with it.
    August 6th, 2010 at 08:34am
  • fallingintoshadows

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    oh and dont listen to the ppl who hate you. no story ever seems truely real without its problems. if everything was happy all the time the story would be boring and so completely fake. like ive heard some one say before (just cant remember who) nothing is ever black and white. (in this case all happy or all sad). keep the story however you see fit to end it and dont let other ppl change how you write it....then it wouldnt be your story now would it? (wow. . . ill be lucky if something that smart sounding ever comes from again) lol
    August 6th, 2010 at 07:41am
  • fallingintoshadows

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    OH MY GAWH!!! i had a feeling that something like that was going to happen at the party! POOR NICKY!!!!!! i wish jason would get locked up in prison and have trouble holding soap............ALL THE TIME. that way theres no E to make him forget!!!! keep writing. I love how i can come on everyday and theres something new to read. and to answer your previous previous question about cliche parties in high school i didnt go but in college i did. and boy let me tell you i remember my first time drunk....well not remember but ive heard stories....and the hang over wasnt fun either. :P never again. lol. cant wait for the sequel.
    August 6th, 2010 at 07:34am
  • sk8er.bird

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    OOO MY GOOOD!!!!!!
    THAT CAN NOT BE THE END!!!!!!
    I'M LIKE CRY RIGHT NOW!!!
    I KNEW JASON WAS NEVER GOOD!!!!!!
    August 6th, 2010 at 06:24am
  • Emochick920

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    This my friends words "you flipping bastard she only read me the last 4 chapters and im already pissed!!!!!! You better make it better we both hate jason and by the end of the story nicky and lucas better be happily after" lets just say she wasnt happy but I must agree lulu and nicky better be together and jason should be lying dead in a ditch somewhere dead after being raped by an 80 year old man thatd make us happy oh and she wanted to know if lulus ass hurt after being raped...
    August 6th, 2010 at 06:24am