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  • boyking

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    Oh God.
    Why am I going to hate you later?
    What's going to happen at that party?
    Alright, I'm freaking out right now.
    And even though this chapter was adorable, I'm nervous.
    But a good nervous, because this story is ridiculously awesome.
    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Seriously.
    Update soon.
    I'm dying. D:
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • Emochick920

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    Nicky shouldnt work so hard lol puppy had to help him
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:43am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Ahahahaha! So amazing!
    :D

    -kayt
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:41am
  • Emochick920

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    Lol puppy cant cook. XD
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:37am
  • boyking

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    Oh wow.
    You don't even know how much I loved this chapter.
    When they were in the shower . . . so fucking cute. (:

    I'm glad that Lulu was trying to do something nice for Nicky.
    Because Nicky does so much for him. :D
    He should do some more, too!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:22am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Awwwwwwwwwww, Lulu's just so adorable. He's like a wocket that I can put in my pocket. :D

    Yeah, I wanna go to college. But... my grades kinda suck and we don't have money. :/
    I like a mix of both, because it can't be sex all the time and cutesy moments get old. :)

    -kayt
    August 6th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    D'awhhh. :]

    Dude, as much as I love Lu,
    I'm really with Nicky on this one.
    I don't trust Jason either. >.<

    1. Yepp.
    2. Well... depends on my mood. >:D
    -Wiggles Eyebrows-
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:34pm
  • XstarnightX

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    ugh I dislike Jason very much, and Lucas is pissing me off. He's so needy and whiny, and for some reason I want to push him off a bridge, then laugh about it!
    Nicky <3 He is amazing, and he shouldn't stick around for Lulu cause Lulu doesn't deserve Nicky, he deserves Jason :P

    1.Yes I want to go to college, get a good education hahahaha nah I just want to go so I can be a better writer.
    2. I dont care, just as long as they are both sweet.
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • Emochick920

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    1. yeah i wanna major in like literature or something
    2. I prefer the at peace and in love scenes cuz I like theyre little moments like cuddling and watching a movie
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:05pm
  • Emochick920

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    Jason needs to die a slow a painful death maybe eaten alive by sharks yeah thatd make me happy. Lulu is way too innocent. Nickybear will do anything to,please lulu. XD
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:00pm
  • livelaughloveSING566

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    reading your updates always makes me feel so insignificant.....haha i love it!!! but something really dramatic needs to happen. they're getting kinda reckless, so i'm just waiting for them to accidentally let the cat out of the bag.....or the 'puppy' (that was my weak attempt at humor...:/ don't judge). like maybe at the party they get drunk and something happens....? haha but don't feel any obligation to my ideas. i'm tired so i'll reread this later and probably hit myself really hard. and yay for the guys reading this!!!! even the ones that won't admit they are!!!! you're such a good writer!! i don't understand for the life of me how you update so quickly...but i am not complaining!!! now i'll stop my little rant! keep going!!!! and going!!!! and going!!! and...you get the idea
    August 5th, 2010 at 10:50pm
  • xxfallenangel48xx

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    idk why but i keep having this alarm go off in my head saying "Jason is still EVIL!" lol well in response to your question yes i have been to many high school partys well more like highschoolers and mostly dropouts and yes its all loud music, booze, drugs and sex. its really boring if ur not into booze or drugs. i love partys but i hate drinking and i hate having to deal with sloppy and violent drunk people so i opt for concerts instead of partys. much more fun and entertaining and nothin illegal.
    August 5th, 2010 at 09:52pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    I didn't even really get to do anything fun. Lily took me and Nicky canoeing with her once, but they wouldn't let me paddle. Something about being too uncoordinated, and fearing for ther lives.
    -Snorts-
    Yeah, I would never let you paddle either Lu.
    x3

    <3
    August 5th, 2010 at 09:44pm
  • CoyoteWylie

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    You know what? I think Jason's a creepy little stalker. You know what else? He can go bite me. HE'S the one preying on Lulu, not Nicky! And if Nicky has any sense at all, he'll "accidentally" sneak into Jason's room and "accidentally" club him over the head with a stapler and "accidentally" shove his unconscious body in a closet and just maybe lean against the handle, and by "accident" lock the door.

    And Lu can't get mad, 'cause it was clearly an accident :]
    August 5th, 2010 at 08:37pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Oh, no good ever comes from parties, from my experience. :/

    Never been to a party. I'm an introvert. I don't like going out and... dealing with people.

    -kayt
    August 5th, 2010 at 07:55pm
  • cookieZZ

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    Oh, and I like Nicky's POV more, I dunno, I like him. Lots.<3
    August 5th, 2010 at 06:54pm
  • cookieZZ

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    I love this story<3333

    And I've been to a few highschool parties, most were alright, just booze and chit-chat. But once, it was waaaay out of control, like, drunk people making out everywhere. I was the only sober person there, I tell ya.
    August 5th, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • Emochick920

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    Lol lulus super excited. Nicky better watch him I can imagine lulu drunk thatd be bad.
    August 5th, 2010 at 06:44pm
  • MiniMCR

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    ooh.
    this isnt gonna end well.
    August 5th, 2010 at 06:40pm
  • iTyTyler

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    i think someone should slap Jason upside the head :) lol that boy is no good and i know it
    August 5th, 2010 at 05:06pm