February 18th, 2008 at 04:17am
aw, I liked it
Poor her but she is better off without him
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January 17th, 2008 at 09:14pm
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ps it was still so sad. but well writtenJanuary 15th, 2008 at 11:44pm
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OMG GIANNA! chapter 6 is sooooooooooooooo amazing! kudos! *hugs*
YAY!January 15th, 2008 at 11:43pm -
That chapter was scary.
The way that you made her more scared of him than she was of the flames was so well done.
And she still had some feelings for him. That'd be almost sweet, were it not for the violence.
And the ending was very cool. I liked it a lot ;)January 15th, 2008 at 04:57pm -
well, i LOVED IT! and u need to update soon!!!!!!
January 15th, 2008 at 04:54am -
omg gi!
you out did your self on numero fiveo!
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i loved it!
esspecially the last line!January 11th, 2008 at 06:05am -
I would try and put into words how much I love this story... but I'd put all these other amazing comments and your amazing writing to shame.
^_^January 9th, 2008 at 05:15am -
Oooo enter the boyfriend... you do feel sorry for Ian though :( mind you coming round afte GA is not the best time to try and be subtle!January 9th, 2008 at 02:31am
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great story! very origional!!!!!!! I saw ur journal and thought, "ooooh i wanna read!" Lol more soon!January 8th, 2008 at 09:32pm
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Awesome chapter January 8th, 2008 at 10:07am
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Wow this is really good
Great job =]January 7th, 2008 at 07:06am -
Ooo I love this... new character too, woo!
W here is her actual boyfriend though, has he not visited her at all?December 31st, 2007 at 07:37pm -
Hooray for updates!
Ahh, Ian. It's looking to quite a nice (or maybe even tragic?) romance on the hospital ward there.
Will they get together?
Does he see past the scars and disfiguration, and really see her?
Or will horrible circumstance be the end of them before it's begun?
Why do I always seem to ask questions, when I know they're going to be rhetorical?
It was amazing.December 31st, 2007 at 07:22pm -
job*December 31st, 2007 at 11:26am
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top stuff. love the description. ur doin a good jod.December 31st, 2007 at 11:25am
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Man, how can you get better with every update???
That was so good,. You description never ceases to amaze. Still just as horrific, but now even more in-depth, hightlighting her injuries greusomely, amazingly.
Yay. Update soon would be much appreciated ^^December 31st, 2007 at 03:37am -
well, what can I say? Amazing, I love the way you have worded it and explained everything she is thinking, feeling and seeing. I am just like, wow... update when you canDecember 31st, 2007 at 03:06am
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wow, this is amazing stuff
you can almost feel te pain and confusion, you have described it all so well
I can't wait for moreDecember 29th, 2007 at 09:02pm -
Aftermath. Such a perfect aftermath.
The confusion, over whether she was alive or dead; trying to reason with herself on how she couln't be dead, but at the same time, still undecided.
The description of the injuries were horrific. And that's what made them perfect.
And when she asked for a mirror at the end...God, you have got to feel sorry for her. Aww.
Perfect. Again. Please more soon ^^December 29th, 2007 at 07:54pm
I liked this story. It was good. I think you captured the scene very well. Though the description seemed a little off in some places and I was lost and had to read through a few paragraphs a few times.
Unlike what people usually say, it wasn't a blur. It wasn't slow motion. I really do remember it. I say I don't, however. I never want to relive that moment, as I do whenever I describe it.
I think that was my favorite part. Describing how it is to go through that. I guess describing the moment. It really brings out something that drags you deeper into the story.
I might read further into the story. I kind of want to know what happens. You left it at a slightly cliche' cliff hanger for the first chapter (right as I thought, I went blank[/i) type thing) but I think that works fine for this story.
So over all I liked it. (: I also might read something else of yours.
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