Aw I love how her a Sergio had a 'moment' at the end. ;) I wonder where that will leave them and if how Iker will react. You are a really good writer! I love how the story flows and it's always relevant, not like choppy. Great update, loved it as alway! :D
i like it the pace seems to fit the story nicely but its all p to what you think is right for the story what do you want to happen and how long it should be stories always have ending it just be at the right moment
i guessed rightttt ;)
i love sergio more than the world....