Thus the Siren of Blood Was Born - Comments

please update

Finally :D I'm happy they have found each other again after so long :)
Update sooner this time! :L

Great update :) .. Finally :D
Update again soon.

Very brilliant and creative! :) I like it. Very well-written and neat as well. :)

Great update :) Been waiting a while for this :)
Update soon!

hurry hurry HURRY up and update xD It's awesome!

^ Actually scrap that last part. I wasn't paying enough attention, obviously, and didn't see that your word counts ARE in your author's notes. :P Sorry!

Hey :) I just read your journal asking why this was reported.
I honestly don't think it deserves to be.

For the content part of it:

There are a few gramatical errors. 2 I found in the first chapter were:

"The parties ending so soon,"
This should be "party's" as what you mean to say is "the party is". "Parties" is plural.

Angelus bit into his wrist and placed it at the girls mouth, letting her drink from him feverishly.
This should be "girl's" as it is possessive.

By "paragraphs not used" they could have been referring to how you've started a new line after someone speaks, when this is not necessary.

"Mum it's beautiful, thank you."

Crystal said softly to her mother, she'd bought her a brand new dress to wear this fall.

This should probably be written on the same line like ""Mum it's beautiful, thankyou," Crystal said softly to her mother. She'd bought her a brand new dress to wear this fall."

By "comments/descriptions posted as chapters" perhaps they were referring to the inclusion of the word count in the contents and not in the author's comments, but that'd be just a tad anal >.>

I didn't read further because vampire stories just really aren't my thing, sorry. If you'd like someone to check over the rest I'd be happy to do so, though I hope this here helped anyway :)
Sorry if I've been a bit too hard. I don't think it's any reason to be reported...I mean, a simple comment here would have sufficed, surely.

This story is amazing. I'm only on Chapter 4 and I NEEEEEDED to comment. I think you captured the old Angel perfectly, please keep updating!

Will you be updating soon? I really like this story.

The only thing I don't like is the amount of characters, and the switches of P.O.V's. It gets a little confusing after awhile. However, I do like the concept of this-and your title-it's quite interesting. I also liked that it took place in the 1800's. Those sort of things just interest me even more. Nicely done.

This story seems lovely and really interesting. I guess that I will have to get to know the characters a little more, though. I am still getting them confused with each other, there are just so many. I will learn their names, though.
I can't wait to see what will happen next! Update soon! :]