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  • chewnait

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    WOOT first comment! :P

    A little early to tell, but this could have potential. I like your use of imagery and everything was detailed.

    In chapter 2, I had the squeal: "coconut shampoo." COCONUT! <3

    Anyways, I like it so far and will be looking fowards to any updates you may have :)
    September 17th, 2011 at 08:14pm
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