Stupid Little Game - Comments

Wow. You have serious talent. I love this. You're style of writing is surely different, and I like it.

i liked it. it was short but it suited it and i liked how the reader has to put together the pieces and the last line was great - just topped it off. very cool story :)

Hmm, I kinda like your style of writing.
It was pretty good.

From looking at the summary I'll be honest, if this weren't a comment swap right now, I probably woud read it. Simply because it doesn't have a summary. But that's just a pet peeve of mine.

I saw a few errors in here that could have been avoided if you proof read it before posting. Despite that, it was a good story. Especially for how short it was. I liked how to the point you were and how you had that sad undertone to the story. It was a good read.

Writing this comment while reading.

The title is... um - an All Time Low song? xD Or is it close to one? Hmm... but either way, I kinda like it, kinda don't. It seems played out, for some weird reason.

The layout is amazing. Gothic, I'd call it. Love it.

The summary iiis not there. I don't like that, even though it is a one shot. Give us at least one sentence to work with, hon.

1/1 I slowed to a stop so, I could catch my breath. No need for that comma.
Perhaps I was being a sore loser but, I wish you would have never won our stupid little game. No need for that comma either, but I love how you ended it there.

Good job.

Oh my gosh, he died didn't he?!
I love how subtle that was and how you had to figure it out for yourself.
I love how you wrote everything, and how it all flowed like an organic piece of art.
I love how wonderful the plot was.
I love this <3