Up In Flames - Comments

Ut oh.
Well written and the layouts fking rad!
Update yeah? ;-;

hmm well well I am interested. drawn in in the first few sentances. Im not entirely sure it is my thing but your writing style drew me in so I am curious. I don't usually get drawn in that quickly so well done. good simple discriptions and surprise actions.

Urrrr. *-* This is very well written! The layout is nice too~! I think I'm attracted to Bones as well. XP I sense a very very amazing story on it's way. Please update soon! I love it. ^^

I really like it(:
Desciptive is good(:
I'm glad your journal gave me this link:D

I really like this.
You write so nice.
I love the picture, the sticky out spines, I can't stand though :P

Your writing ability is great. <3
I like it.
I'm subbing so make sure to update yes? ;D
Good luck, loves.

Okay, whoa. I love the entire concept of this. And the names are awesome! It's amazingly well-written, intriguing and leaves you wanting more. I'm subbbbing~ <3

haha, I like it :) it's cute. I love the nickname 'Bones' *is a total Star Trek nerd*

aside from that, I want to know what happens :D

i like it :D
a lot
yes yes.
quite

this is really good.
i cant wait to see where this goes [=

This is so well written. (:
It's so intriguing, so I'm subbing.
I want to see where you take this.
Update soon? <3

Really great chapter.
This story really makes me want to read more.
I enjoyed it.
I subscribed definitely.
So that means you sooooo need to post soon.
Please!

“Kind of like how we invite you every week, except Bones’s presence is actually enjoyable.” That made me laugh, because I totally said something just like it, once. o.o

I couldn't find any grammar or punctuation mistakes, and that's major thumbs up!

I'm agreeing with That Kid;. You're a great writer. (:

I'm subscribing - so... update soon? Please?

I like your writing.
I got lured in at the first paragraph.
There are some writing styles I can't stand; yours is one of the kinds I enjoy to read. :)
Keep this going.
Oh, and can you find pictures of the main characters? :P
I would love to see how you imagine them to look. :)