Anxiety - Comments

Awee, i love this story.:D
It's so cuteeee.
I reallly hope he agrees to being his boyfriendd.<3 :D

Oh. My. God. I love your story!!! please update soon I wanna know whats going to happen! :D

say yes please?

I like it(:
update soon?

Cute idea, but quite rushed.

Oh, and please make sure to correct grammar and spelling. There, their, and they're are three words that sound alike, but mean different things. I caught a lot of errors when I was reading, so when one of you two has a break, please fix that before someone reports this story.

hey!!
i loved the new chapters!!
XD
and you posted the same chapter like 3 times
just letting you know
lawlz
XD
you must update soon!!!
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i love this story!!
XD
its ahmazing!!
XD
lawlz
you must update it soon!!!!
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Nooo! Don't delete! D: I like this story! I always forget to comment. My apologies.

Please update

yay project partners :]

Yup. You're gonna have to update unless you wanna die >:D

Yay! You updated!
Update again, yeah? :) Can't wait till this story gets exciting!

It's good but I agree with Malchick Gay and The Kid; Mysterious.
I like it still :3
Update soon?

To add to The Kid; Mysterious. Payton isn't 22. But in the description is says he hasn't spoken in 12 years, but in the story, you wrote since he was 10.

The font makes the story hard to read.
I had to go to Default Layout to view it. :(

There was one large block of text that I got lost in.
You might want to break that up so you don't scare some readers off by the size of it.

Over here I found a few mistakes:

"Hey Payton" He smiled, hugging me. I smiled back, taking out a pen and paper and wrote;

Hey Preston. How was your morning?

You might want to go for:

"Hey Payton." He smiled, hugging me. I smiled back, taking out a pen and paper and wrote:

Hey Preston. How was your morning?

Your spacing also looks like it's not consistent. :-/

Over here I got confused:

I made my way down the hall, keeping my eyes on the floor as I walked but soon my body collided with metal and I knew someone slammed me into the lockers. I groaned, as I tried standing up but a foot on my chest stopped me.

I didn't know he fell down. I know he got slammed into the lockers, but then all of a sudden a foot is on his chest and he's trying to stand up. You should add that he fell down. :)

I never talked and I swore to myself I would never talk and I'm gay I would never make out with a girl.

That sounds like a run on sentence.

You've caught my attention though with this story. :) I'll subscribe.

i like it :]
although the color of the font makes it hard to read and there were a few spelling errors
but its all fixable
*subscribs*

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