We're All Just Victims of a Crime - Comments

  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    I just spent two hours reading both this and "When I Go, Bring Me Back Again." Aside from a few minor spelling/grammar errors (which we all have from time to time--no worries) this entire story is amazing. I'm literally in love with it and dying for more. I really don't even have words to describe. It's one of those stories that have made me swoon, laugh, and cry all at the same time. The perfect kind of story.

    Frank getting hit by the car was definitely not what I expected but in a way...thank goodness it happened because Gerard would be dead if it didn't. Judging by the summary of the sequel, I'm assuming Frank doesn't die and comes back but that still leaves the question as to where he'll be with Gerard. I can't wait for more and I'll be subscribing. Now, excuse me as I go and nurse my back. It's aching from sitting in the same position while reading the story. Keep up the good work.
    September 12th, 2010 at 05:26am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    oh my goodness. i finally finished reading the prequeal to this so I'm happy. I watched a movie like this it was on lifetime and it was called Three Days and it ended the way you made the other. Omg at first i was like this is gonna make me cry and i didnt want to now i did and i have to keep reading it. FRANKIE CAN'T DIE! so write more :)
    August 31st, 2010 at 06:45am
  • coastofharry.

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    i miss this story.
    August 30th, 2010 at 08:32am
  • Just.a.Kid

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    Argh! Don't leave Gee! Why do characters almost always the opposite of what you want them to do?
    grrrr...

    But like I said earlier, I fucking love this story! I can't wait to read more!
    August 21st, 2010 at 01:29am
  • Iero My Hero.

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    I have lost a lot of sleep in the past few days because I was trying to catch up on the prequel.
    Which, by the way, was amazing. I giggled, I cried, I roared at Gerard and Frank's stupidity. I loved it.

    So if you kill Frank, Gerard, or Mikey, you will recieved a combination of the roar/tears, which is NEVER a good mix.
    Please update soon, this is really great.
    August 16th, 2010 at 10:41am
  • Azahlea

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    Hullo I am BACK! And I must say
    GERARD YOU FUCKING IDIOT THAT'S THE OPPOSITE OF WHAT FRANK WANTS FOR YOU!

    -ahem- yes. looking forward to reading more ^^
    August 14th, 2010 at 09:35pm
  • stay weird

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    omg that letter was just so heartbreaking and sweet all at once. i seriously wanted to cry. and poor frankie :( i really want him to wake up and i really hope gerard doesn't just give up on him.

    great chapter and i can't wait for more. :D
    August 14th, 2010 at 05:51am
  • tyckerommcr

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    i just read the final part of when i go.... and this one, dont die frankie! :(
    hope this one will be as good as the prequel :))
    August 13th, 2010 at 09:59pm
  • muzzie23

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    what will Frankie do when he wakes up
    August 11th, 2010 at 08:40pm
  • muzzie23

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    GERARD
    August 11th, 2010 at 08:39pm
  • muzzie23

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    FRANKIE
    August 11th, 2010 at 08:37pm
  • yippeedoo

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    Coma? :O
    Well at least he didn't exactly die... :P
    I hope he wakes up. >:|
    And as for Gerard... -shakes head- :B
    August 11th, 2010 at 07:27am
  • Beast In Repose

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    Oh my god. I've gone through and read the prequel, and I'm in LOVEEEEE! I wasn't able to read it last night and I was like "Nooo! *stabs self in eye*". But there's no more updates. No! Update soon, I beg you.
    August 11th, 2010 at 05:50am
  • Psycho.

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    The description sounds like a TV drama. Haha. >_<
    Please, don't let Frank die. I'll do anything, anything, just don't let him die! *drama queen*
    Please? :3
    August 10th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • Lithium Lullabies

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    Awwwh, Frankie is such a sweet heart!!!!
    That letter was sweet. I would like to get one like that, under different circumstances of course, someday.

    *glares at bf and repeats* I WOULD LIKE TO GET A LETTER LIKE THAT SOMEDAY... SOON. LIKE, TOMORROW, OR NOW. >.>

    <.< *pops cheeto in mouth* huh?

    >.> *sighs in defeat* -.- Never mind, asswhipe.

    Anyways, yeah. That did not ACTUALLY just happen, but it happened in my head, so yeah. It would happen if the situation were to occur outside of my mind... Mmmhm...

    Anyways, i got WAY off track, now didnt i? I'm just in the rambling mood cuz i'm procrastinating and i ramble when i procrastinate *and i'm doing it again* So, i love this story and cant wait for more. Bye.
    August 10th, 2010 at 07:41pm
  • Prison Riot

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    I-ugh-I-I-AHHHHHHHH!!!!! :D I had to sneak onto my computer to read this and the end of the last one and I am so glad I did, the suspense was ACTUALLY killing me

    FRANKIE CAN'T DIE!!!!!!!!!!

    But on the bright side, at least my prediction was somewhat accurate :P xx
    August 10th, 2010 at 05:07pm
  • MCRisMyHero

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    AAAARRGGHHH!!!
    Don't die, Frank!
    Don't leave, Gee!
    D: D:
    August 10th, 2010 at 01:33pm
  • LGFUAD_JJ

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    Frank's letter is just ugh...So what Frank would write, I swear.
    Is that weird?
    Hm...
    Noooo first of all. FRANK DON'T DIE BUDDY ):
    And...Gerard...You can't leave D:
    It's okay if updates are tad slow, especially if you're updating other stories! :D
    Liking this btw, the layout, and uhm...cover/banner (:

    /xoxo JJ.
    August 10th, 2010 at 12:28pm
  • Hezzarther

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    iamsocunfused :*

    Jsyk, I liked his letter.
    August 10th, 2010 at 09:55am
  • Castiean

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    frankie better not die!!! u make him die and ill uh ill send my army of paper clips after u and their vicious little things,they will eat ur face off D:
    and that other dude better be thomas,and gerard better not leave cause if he does mikey better drag his butt back cause frank needs him >.>
    August 10th, 2010 at 09:34am