Pinwheel Love - Comments

You shoul write out a whole story about these two characters. It was amzing. I loved every part of it. I cried my eyes out, mostly because I have fiction on repet but eh, I loved it.

Thank you!!!!!

I was so sad when I found out this was a one shot. It sounds like the perfect prologue for an amazing story. I really hope that after the contest you will make this into a story.

Ohhhh.
Ohhhhhhhhhh.
OHHHHHHHHHHHH.

The ending was saddd D:
But I loved it! So cute :3

I absolutely loved it!
It was amazing and I could picture it in my mind.
The description was great and the amount of feeling put into it was great.
I loved the ending. It was so sad and I felt like these characters were so real and easy to connect with. This is only the second entry I've read and I'm absolutely amazed.
I love it.

Wowzerz, I just realized that you and me have two things in common in our stories. One, something has fallen to the ground, and two, both of our male characters don't have built chests. You have good taste in symbolism and men. Lol Great one-shot.