Call My Name - Comments

kiurehfkehrgbkshfd!
i love this!!!!!!!!!!!<3

they're in like sin:P

i really like it. keep updating :D

I lurrrvee it(: <3
-Gannon

good story :)

good story :)

I like it :)
It's worded really well, and very detailed.

Keep it up.

Oh my gosh! This is amazing! <3

This is really cute. Im gunna be honest. I read the description and was a bit skeptical, but I really liked it. You're a good writer <3

what an effin douchebag:O but at least he apologized :D loved it, sweets<3

aha, Aaron cute & Dylan but, total cocky jackasses! (:
This is a really good story!

Me likey!
The twins omg seem soo hot lmfao xD
Great story as ever!
I like Aaron and Dylan [[I think that's his name]].

loved it!
:D
great writer

This is great. My only complaint is that sometimes you forget to double space when somone is talking. For example in the first chapter.

you did amazing.

aaaand chapter four: I'm a little confused. How did she not notice them in her class the day before? They were in her lunch so wouldn't she notice them before? Did they get their schedule's changed or something?

And thanks for editing the curse word. I thought I was the only one who did that! Anyway, so far so good. I can't seem to figure out which one she'll end up with (My bets ARE on Aaron thought)so that just makes me want to read more.

Well update soon :)

Janine Mimi

chapter three (I guess on here people don't comment on each chapter? I don't know, but I do so there! More comments for you xD): Way to go Summer! You tell those boys! I like them. They are funny, but if I guy just came up to me and said that, I'd slap him silly! Make out? Really man? Ha ha but it made me laugh, epecially when she was like "Really? Nope don't see it." Good job. You can make it descriptive and meaningful, but also teen spirited and fun.

Janine Mimi

Now on to chapter two: I like it so far. I think you might want to remember to check over for grammar mistake (which we're all guilty of, yes?). So far so good. A little short, but I got more to read so that's okay. Again still very good! I plan to keep on going :]

Janine Mimi

As someone who is particularly religious, I felt I could really connect with the character. You had good detail and the story seemed to flow. You also did a good job of adding the emotion to what was happening. It's good so far, and I will definitely read more. :)

Janine Mimi

Hmmm....
This is good, sounds like something everyone encounters every once in a while.
Doesn't have any profanity which is a bonus, I loved the first chapter the most!
Jesus is my Heart and Soul! :D I loved the lesson on the 1st chapter.
All in all, this is good, keep it going!
Definitely Subscribin!

Awesome :)
I cant wait to read more.
Keep Writing!!