Well he was a bit of a twat! He obviously didn't trust her in some ways or it wouldn't have been brought up with Jake! And he obviously doesn't understand or know what it feels like to go through what she did! Although I love them together if he acts like a prick about that, she deserves better!
I really loved that chapter as well! I specifically liked the part where you said."I took in the whole scene of kids and bands and older people and realized, this is Josh’s life...I’m not sure why, but I felt like I was intruding on some part of his life" I think that explained the whole situation perfectly and I could see it in my head. I also liked how you included the advice from both the girls and Oli. I can't wait to see what shit is going to hit the fan!
I can't wait to see the drama unfold. I think Josh is gonna get tired if she can't open up and tell him about the nightmares. I love how you brought Oli and Bring Me The Horizon into this chapter. Are they really friends? I'm not too familiar with them. What kind of accent does he have? I don't know.
I can't wait to see what drama is going to happen in the new chapter (: This story excites me very much because you can't tell what's going to happen in the next chapter. I just really hope she'll open up soon, Josh needs to know everything. <3 x
I was beginning to wonder when the nightmares would cone back! And I just realized that this story is on chapter 26! I can remember back to when it was on chapter 1, and I adored the Chapter so much that I subscribed! It was so worth it!
i think they'll have a fight if she doesnt tell him about the nightmares and she'll shy away from him because hes gonna be touring and touring is hard to keep a relationship but i think they can do it
OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER AHHHH. I loved this one as well, by the way. It was superly duper well written! You got all of the emotions across flawlessly :)
Okay, this really isn't good at all D:
I hope everything works out in the end :(
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