Thanks for the help and th idea! :)
December 11th, 2010 at 02:41am
It's a shame that not more people have commented... I really like the story so far but as things are I'm not sure the contest will be up anymore. Not enough interest.
Grammar- “Don’t ruin this, Lizzie just got asked on her very first date,” Kaylee snapped as Mason went to thrown (<- throw) away the girls trash.
Some other minor mistakes but no biggie. The part where everyone's texting each other I think it would be easier for people to read if you spaced the text messages out more. Otherwise it looks cramped and harder to read than it actually is.
Hope you plan to keep this story :)