I was recommended this, so I'm a bit late with commenting, but I love this. I really do. It has a very clever plot, and is very realistic. I easily connected with Baybelle (love that name btw). Over all, it's good stuff.
ch7, Hmmm, that was sudden and harsh. Homosexual or not, seems like Mitchall took it too well, walking in on his father having sex with someone else
You have alot of side stories and things that could be character development but seem kind of random. Right now I'm wondering where this is going,
You started the book with the 'secret' of the colors; the rigid nature of the city but, so far no one seems to concerned about keeping the secret from the younger kids or even why the should keep it secret
I like how it took a while for Bay to talk about Mitch's looks. Not as shallow as Sam
No mention from the school of keeping the meaning of the color a secret. How do they keep a bunch of freshman from blurting it all over FB and Twitter?
Awesome chapter!! I really love how this story is going!! I like that you're keeping it pretty realistic - as far as this story goes lmao - but I can't help but imagine how bad it will be when they get into a fight :/ But let's focus on the now and not the later, right? PLEASE update soon :D