When your story description said "Enjoy my good description," or words to that effect, I though 'Oh jeez, this is gonna be bad...' But...wow It was breathtaking. So intricate. So intense. So...brutal, at points. You could really sense the despair, the fear, the uncertainty. Some of the best description in a first chapter I've ever read on here. Wow. How has this got no comments?!??!?
I loved it. If there's more coming, I'd love to read it. Amazing work.
But...wow
It was breathtaking. So intricate. So intense. So...brutal, at points.
You could really sense the despair, the fear, the uncertainty.
Some of the best description in a first chapter I've ever read on here. Wow.
How has this got no comments?!??!?
I loved it. If there's more coming, I'd love to read it. Amazing work.