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  • mrclifz2

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    This was soooooo adorable. I love them together :) if you ever feel like continuing on i would love to read what else you can write!!! good job
    August 19th, 2010 at 08:19am
  • istaytrue

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    I think this should be a story :)
    July 26th, 2010 at 03:27pm
  • Teddi Manni

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    this was extremely adorable :)
    despite minor errors like missing words in sentences this was amazing
    you have a great chance of being in the top three :)
    and after the contest this story could become longer and added more chapters for viewers. I believe theyd really like that :)
    July 26th, 2010 at 02:19pm
  • xxmabbitt

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    Aweh. This is cute.{:
    July 26th, 2010 at 10:30am
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