I really liked the ending to this one. It really was sweet :) Another aspect to the ending was how real it seemed and how well Brian handled it. I can actually see it happening in real life, which makes the story better. I also like how the layout manages to suit both a sweet story and a sick story, so congratulations on that. Only other thing to say really is just that it is quite short, but then again, I don't know what else you would have included in it, so good job.
July 29th, 2010 at 09:25pm