August 18th, 2010 at 02:33pm
Can I say this was amazing :)
There was little errors there and there, but nothing big.
I can see you put a lot of work into this and you did a great job.
I am surprised you don't have more comments, you deserve it.
I loved how you did it like flash backs of his life and how he met Roxanne and stuff, It's very different from the other things I have read.
And at the end, I can't believe he killed her.
Anyway you did an amazing job :D
Zoe x
There was little errors there and there, but nothing big.
I can see you put a lot of work into this and you did a great job.
I am surprised you don't have more comments, you deserve it.
I loved how you did it like flash backs of his life and how he met Roxanne and stuff, It's very different from the other things I have read.
And at the end, I can't believe he killed her.
Anyway you did an amazing job :D
Zoe x