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  • Teddi Manni

    Teddi Manni (100)

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    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Good things:
    Followed the song well. You put a link for the song. Layout was interesting and unique.

    Complaints:
    Grammar errors such as missing words or punctuation.
    Use more detail

    Overall good job!
    July 27th, 2010 at 02:36pm
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