Robot and a Butterfly - Comments

Aww that was really good. I mean it, it was amazing
I almost cried the second time when the Robot couldnt tell Luna what he was thinking and when he couldnt help save her i felt so bad.
The ending was beautiful though :) Really good
Luna, Linden, Pain <3

thanks for the comment :) Tried to fix some stuff., I hope I didn't miss anything... Sounds a bit better now :)

This is a very sweet story.
I would suggest you start new sentences for the dialogues.