9/10 for grammar/spelling -Only a few mistakes :D 9/10 for a readable layout -The font was rather bright, but other than that, good job. 30/30 for relevancy to the title -Totally and completely relevant :D 50/50 for originality/creativity - That's pretty much all I can say xD It's completely original, and it feels exactly how a humorous HP fanfic should. I really, really enjoyed it, SO YOU SHOULD FINISH IT xD
9/10 for grammar/spelling
-Only a few mistakes :D
9/10 for a readable layout
-The font was rather bright, but other than that, good job.
30/30 for relevancy to the title
-Totally and completely relevant :D
50/50 for originality/creativity
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That's pretty much all I can say xD It's completely original, and it feels exactly how a humorous HP fanfic should. I really, really enjoyed it, SO YOU SHOULD FINISH IT xD
Overall:
98/100
Awesome job! :D