Lost in Pages - Comments

i am hooked now. will there be more?

This was extremely amazing - truly.
I felt like you really knew what you were talking about, you pulled me right into the story, and you made it believable.

I could see how this may be relatable to a lot of people as well.
The layout is gorgeous, the title really fits - especially at the end.

Your content was really well-written. I felt like I was there, even though I couldn't really imagine it.
I know that sounds weird and impossible, but I don't know how else to describe it.

The only thing I didn't truly like about this story was the ending - the very ending.
It just... ends. I'm not even sure what happened or why the mom and girl are crying.
Did their dad die? Am I just missing something important?
I wish you would have made that a bit more clear.

But yeah, besides that, I really loved this.
Spectacular job! <3

This was amazing.
Like, seriously.
I actually think the title fits it pretty well.
It's different.

But this is an epic piece of work that you did such a good job on.
I'd be super proud if I were you : D

Wow. This was wonderful. It was so sad; the emotions were portrayed perfectly. I personally like the title :D Lovely job <3

wow.
that was just really stunning.
i loved it.
great solid piece.

I think this was sweet. And probably real for a lot of people, if not for you.

and the title was cute. Loved it!

I really liked it.
I also like the title a lot.
I think it relates really well to the story.
I'm like this too time flies when i'm reading/
You made it really realistic as well.
Really good at portraying emotions

This in one word was: amazing. Brilliant could possibly be an understatment, aha. I like how she used the book to escape from her troubling world, and then, near the end she had to return from the 'fantasy land' back to her problems. It had a very nice, strong message. I believe you did an amazing job. :) <3

Wow, you really took this picture and made it a story, and I like that, no I LOVE that. Your a great writer, you said you don't like the title, i like it, it really makes sense. And when I read, I go out of it too, time just flies. I really like this story! Thanks a bunch for entering it in my contest!!

-Baylee(:

Sad. But I really enjoyed this.
You have a great talent for writing; it isn't about boyfriends and girlfriends, it's about something serious.
I really like that.
Great job.

Oh my God, this was so sad.
But you portrayed emotions perfectly, so I must admire you for that.
I also loved the layout, and the title. I can relate to getting lost in the pages. <3

That was great; you portrayed the emotions very well, and the dialouge from the characters made it very realistic.
Good job. ;D

This broke my heart. </3
It was really sad, but you wrote it beautifully.
All of the descriptions were amazing - it was all so vivid.
Like people before me had said: I'm sure everyone could relate to the part of getting lost in a book. (:
Wonderful job! I hope you win the contest! ;)
<3

Awh, this was lovely. So sad, but so true.

I noticed one typo: I looked over at my alarm clock to checkt he time.. Should really be check the time =]

Apart from that, it was perfection. I could almost hear the fighting and shattering of glass and the yelling, and I could relate when she simply buried her head in a book. I've done that myself, or started writing, and time really does fly.

The end was so sad. I think it was the whole blanket thing. Ever after they fought, he's still warm and it shows that there's still care there, even if the mom doesn't want there to be. And then when they were both crying, it was so sad.

Brilliant job =] Good luck in the contest!

I liked this a lot, it was sad, and a little scary, but really really good :]

This seems like something just about everyone can relate to; getting lost in a book. I do it all the time.

It was written very nicely. I liked the layout and banner and the title was cute.

Good job (:

I think the title is really nice and so is the layout.
I really love this. It's brillinatly written. Well done :')

I must say, the story is very interesting. I feel the same as she does; trapt in another world when I read a book.

I do like the banner, and the background as well.

I also like the title ;)

10/10, my dear. ^-^