wow, brit. just.. wow. i can feel the emotion in this. you have a real voice when writing. i don't like beth for inviting jimmy over, and i don't like jimmy for standing erin up.
but poor erin. it sounds like something i'd get myself into unconciously haha.
Ahhh. I love this so much. I feel like I can read it 5 more times. I also think you should continue the story, like in the point of view of Beth, Jimmy, the police and her Mom. That would be cool.
i can feel the emotion in this. you have a real voice when writing.
i don't like beth for inviting jimmy over, and i don't like jimmy for standing erin up.
but poor erin. it sounds like something i'd get myself into unconciously haha.