You Bring Out the Best in Me - Comments

This is so cute!

Ah, this is amazing!

i loved this story so much :)

I'm new to all these John stories but I absolutely love them. I'm even starting to write one. Please please please keep writing more!

I can honestly that was a great last chapter. Their was no noticeable spelling errors and no robotic talk which is good and I really like how the story progressed so good job especially for your first story :) Thanks for writing

This was a very well thought out and developed story. I fell in love with both characters and the story overall. Some of the grammar was off in the beginning (missing/misplaced words, spelling errors/missing letters, etc.) but the story line was so good that I overcame it by the fourth or fifth chapter.

I love your character development and how you don't rush things too much. Your flow was very nicely paced and realistic. I hope you start another John/The Maine story soon, 'cause I would love to read it! <3

AWW please dont tell me this is the end :c

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That was perfect

i've just read this full story! it's amazing and sweet and perfect aw <3

:[ … its over

Oh jeez I have to be honest this robotic talk is such a turn off from reading and getting into the story I think you have a pretty good plot and stuff you just really need to go back and edit it like majorly and especially the dialogue.

wow :| I just finished and I'm just I dont know! haha I love it, its a great story and wow, listenin the maine and reading is the best combination, I really love it! I found it on tumblr and I read it in one or two days! its adictive! please write another :D I think im fallin in love with John haha crazy!

Epilogue!!

an epilogue is nice
this story is perfect.

awwww loved this chapter :D lol "Did he buy it?" funny :p

i really love this story and especially the last chapter! but i have three questions. was there really no reason for her never using contractions? if there wasn't, was there a reason YOU made her speak without contractions? i just found it really interesting, and i was wondering if there was some hidden reason that she didn't even realize. and are you gonna go into why she used them in the last chapter? and you know how she thinks to herself and there's like two sides? are you gonna go into detail about that? you're such a good writer and i can't wait for the last few chapters!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON <3

i love this story so much :)
please update soon <3

dear god i need more of this please <3

UPDATE PLEASE :)