for lack of a better word, this is amusing, very, deeply, amusing, and enjoyable i might add too. I've only read the first chapter, but I plan o read the rest.
Chapter 19 you have a copy...: “Get in the damned car, Sidney.” He ordered. I tried to stand straight but hit my head on the door. “Ow. I said rubbing the top of my head. Allix chuckled. I looked at him. “What’s so funny?” I growled opening the door and finally getting in the car. Allix smiled at him and shook his head. “Nothing.” He told me. I looked at him through narrow eyes and buckled my seat belt so he could drive away. “Get in the damned car, Sidney.” He ordered. I tried to stand straight but hit my head on the door. “Ow. I said rubbing the top of my head. Allix chuckled. I looked at him. “What’s so funny?” I growled opening the door and finally getting in the car. Allix smiled at him and shook his head. “Nothing.” He told me. I looked at him through narrow eyes and buckled my seat belt so he could drive away.:
I <3 but I hate hunter with a passion. He shall burn in the depths of hell. If he takes her. -_- but if he doesn't and he goes with Sid. Then Ill be okay.
i love this storie it's so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD I CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 19!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE HOW YOU DID IT AND OIPE FOR MORE SO YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ohmigosh, YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She and Allix finally got together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3 This is officially like, my favorite story EVER. Seriously, you got me to type "LIKE". I have horrible speech patterns. I'm even typing how I think. Lovely. But OHMIGOSH, YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Allix & Skylar 4evr!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And God, I am SUCH a girl. But I don't care. They are so cute together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T LET HUNTER TRY TO STEAL HER. HE IS NOT WORTHY OF THE HUMAN. Lol. And mmmmm. I still stand by my first statement: Allix is SMEXY. *goes googly eyed* Haha, just kidding. About the googy-eyed part. My not going googy-eyed doesn't mean he isn't still incredibly smexy, because he's the epitome of Smexiness. And um, yeah, I'm going to shut up now and stop rambling and embarrassing myself. WHY DOES THIS ALWAYS HAPPEN WHEN I COMMENT??? Wait. I actually know the answer to this: IT'S AFTER THREE AM. Haha, I am sooooo freaking hyper right now it's not funny. Although it probably is. And AGAIN with the rambling. My thoughts are all over the place right now. So, ummm...... yeah.
THIS IS SO AMAZING AND I'M IN LOVE WITH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GOING TO SHUT UP AND SLEEP NOW AND STOP EMBARRASSING MYSELF. BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She CAN'T kiss Hunter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S AN IDIOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHE NEEDS TO BE WITH ALLIX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pouts*
*squeals happily* Aww, they're so cute! God, I love your chapters. They're so LONG and AWESOME. I'm only starting chapter 4! I love this sooooo much! And yummm. He's smexy. Lol.
I'm liking it a lot more and more ^^ I'm usually not into this stuff and TWILIGHT epically murdered Vampires for me But this is a good comeback for them.. And Allix is cool ^^ This is more serious than I though it would be >.< when I read the first few chapters I thought it would be an all out humor You're doing good kid ^^
I love this story! Allix (sp?) needs to give her time though, I mean if I was dragged from my home like she was I wouldn't be happy either. I just want them together! I mean, Hunter seems alright but I think Allix and her are cuter together(: Update soon! also, what ever happened to the gym teacher? Will they ever talk again?