Gah, I hate you you know. Why would you make Gee fo that? I loved the update and the background, the picture is so cute. ^^ Update or else... (pretty please) O_O
I'm so sorry V! I'm sorry I couldnt comment but heres my comment. It was short =[ but informative. Gerards a little punk scaring out like that. But I guess it was for the best. xoxo
Hi, me again. Awwwwwwwwwwww berts going to ruin it.. mean bert. and stupid gerard. lol jk. i liked it and i cant wait for the second half. update soon or no hoodie! just kidding. I would never do that to you.
Hey, V (again, lol) Okay, okay I know I always say this but I like this story. But, thats starting to get old now isn't it? Okay, first off I like the length of this , but its longer than usual so we know more. I liked the Flashback, but you could have been more discriptive, but thats just me. Second, I think you could have put in a little more information in like when they were in school and such. Also that also reminds me poor Mrs. Lane... Anyways, um yeah, you should say like why Gerard was at the school and such, blah blah. I cant even type good because you got me all emotional about Mrs. Lane, I hate you. ( love you :mrgreen:) Otherwise all that stuff it's a really good start. Cant wait for more hun!