Walk With the Wind - Comments

Ha! I love guys like that....
The sassy ones, not the ones that give people headaches. lol.
great update, PLEASE CONTINUE!

I like it! Thanks so much for asking me to read, otherwise I wouldn't have thought to!

I can't wait for the next chapter. I love Paige, lol!

gah! finished it.
It's really good so far. You have my interest. ha.
Update soon please?

Hey, finished the first part.
very promising. :D

I've read it, and I liked it... It was really good. Can't wait till you write more....XD

I enjoyed it alot but in chapter 2 there were a few mistakes like captialization and no puncation, but other than that it is really great I enjoy it alot and write more and keep it up I can tell it's going to be a great story.

awe, thanks to all you guys for the comments, brings a smile on my face:) Thank you!

I like this! And I especially like the fact that you asked me to read it, it makes me feel special :) You make me jealous though, I can never remember my dreams and when I do they're really weird! Anyways keep it up!
Oh yeah, I subscribed too!

I like the idea, it's good.
And I almost have no idea what is going to happen! WOO!
I'm gonna subscribe now!

Ohh! But one thing that is really bugging me.
And I'm sorry to nit pick, but you may be doing it on purpose:
At the moment you're spelling Paige like the book page. 'Page'
'Paige' in the name it has an 'i'.
Stupid synonyms.

I LAHB IT! Thanks for the read.

This is a really good start to a story(:

I like it, though try to be a bit more discriptive. thanks for asking me to read it. it's a great start!

Reminds me of blood and chocolate a bit. :D This is really good so far. :)

This is a good start! yay for you!

lol niiice i wish I had cool dreams.
anyways, you asked me to check this out, so i did. ummm i know how writers like to build things up, y'know? sorry, i just think you were starting a little slow, a little dull. i mean, i can tell its gonna be brilliant, honestly, but people need the beginning to catch them immediately, or they wont hang on.
AND you should totally do a awesome layout! cuz they're fun. :) if you need hellp or anything, i'd love to make one for you!
but yeah... pretty good start and i can't wait to see how this turns out!

This is really good! Very brilliant. :)