Build God, Then We'll Talk - Comments

OMG amber this is AMAZING!!!!

NICE!!!

OMFG.
this.
is.
amazing.
I love your writing style and the whole idea in general...
can't wait for the next chapter :)

Ooh, the plot thickens. This reminds me of a dream I had once. xD

Now I understand why you asked me if I knew The Beatles did LSD. xD
I don't know how this story could get any better, but I know you'll amaze me with the next chapter, sorta like how you did that with this one, too. :D

Holy mother of God that was good. I love it! And I do hope there's going to be more.

Christ on a bicycle, Amber. I don't even know if its possible for me to love this story more than I already do. And yet, you make it possible every fucking time.
My brother's KAD book is sitting right next to me.
Btw, the part about the Placebo shirt just made me happy. I love them. xD And the part about her mom making her eggs reminded me of this one part in The Crow. But that's beside the point.
You're doing an amazing job on this story.

I lovelovelove it. Each chapter brings a little bit of clarity to the whole of the story. It seems like you have something bigger in mind than just each chapter, which is something I wish I could say about my own stories. But I digress.
I can't wait for more. :D

Y'know, I was totally confused at the beginning, but now I think I'm starting to understand what's going on. And I like it. :D

Ho-ly. Shiiiit.
I love it sooo much. The words are fantastic, and it definitely gives me a killer mental image.
[And this may/may not be the appropriate place to put this, but I'm sorry about signing off so suddenly on MSN a couple of days ago. My computer froze, and by the time it worked, you had signed off, and I felt so bad. D:]
Love you!

This is beautifully written. I love this.
Keep writing please?
:]

Goddamn. You just... I don't know what the hell you just did, but whatever it was, it was fucking awesome.
I subscribed, if you plan on updating this. :D