I Believe - Comments

  • dr. faustus

    dr. faustus (1070)

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    Yes, I agree with kunoichi. The simplicity of how well this story was written. I loved the beginning of this so much. My eyes were constantly glued to the screen and there was such pureness within these words. I could feel the time period leap off from the words and how not current it was. I thought they were in France because of the banner and names. Anyway, lovely story and was very much enjoyable.
    July 30th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • rhetoric

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    How have I never read your work?
    This is simply amazing.
    You're so talented. I love Wendla and Melchior. ♥
    July 28th, 2010 at 09:48pm
  • legacy .

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    Amazing ♥
    I love your writing, this is no exception.
    I loved it.
    July 28th, 2010 at 04:58pm
  • occulta.

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    Ah! Such simplicity and happy topic. It's an example of our daily lives, how we cope with our nightly terrors. I was very much entertained reading through the whole story, my attention never wavering. So different from what I've read; so innocent. I felt my heart swoon with Melchior and Wendla's interaction, such purity. This was excellent; a short, nice, attention-grabbing story. Very enjoyable.
    July 28th, 2010 at 08:50am