August 27th, 2010 at 01:49am
And I'm Paralyzed - Comments
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oh god. yes. keep updating this is goooood :)August 27th, 2010 at 01:18am
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I really like the whole concept of mikey having to defeat all the different gerards. I can't wait for more :DAugust 26th, 2010 at 08:25pm
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ZombieAttack!: What's happening is a sort of innner recession, Gerard is afraid of his feelings hurting Mikey, and he is afraid of Mikey's feelings hurting Mikey, so his way to cope with this is by holding his old mind hostage. He created within himself different representations of his different emotions, each his own self, each his own "Gerard." He still really is Gerard, but he is confused and afraid, so he wants to run, but also wants to see Mikey as himself again. It's really complicated, but it has to do with his mind not wanting to face Mikey and his heart wanting to be with him, that and the way he thinks means that it is easier for him to shove out a random other self to face Mikey than true Gerard, even though half of him wants to see his brother again. Does that make sense, sort of?
Ha.
ColorMeBright: I must say I like your username. He isn't diagnosed with a disease, but he has his own mental problems, not serious, but enough to impare his judgement.August 26th, 2010 at 04:56pm -
There is some freaky shit going on in this chapter. lol.August 26th, 2010 at 02:34pm
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Oh wow I've been a total silent subscriber, I must comment! First I will start off with this is a great story. So is Gerard like schizo or something now? That's what it seems like to me, I don't know why but I can totally see him having voices in his head. I actually have a oneshot about that... Anyway, update soon please!August 26th, 2010 at 07:23am
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Awww, Thanks puddin' and i wouldn't leave you! Hell we have a pony together<3! So, Its like split personalities, right? Oh, I was kinda dissapointed when Gerard missed shooting Vanessa...If he ever does I think I might cry of joy...weirdAugust 26th, 2010 at 07:18am
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ZombieAttack!: I missed you so much! I thought you left me D': What's happening to Gerard is his last resort when it comes to his issues with loving Mikey and his issues with Mikey loving him. He is, literally and metaphorically, being held hostage by this beliefs, and they have manifested themselves into "different Gerards" as Mikey calls them.August 26th, 2010 at 06:53am
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Oi, Shit! It's been a while puddin', Mibba would always send me to the Kanye West picture when I tried to comment your story...I'm sorry. Missed Me? You are a genious. A genious with amazing writing skills. Is Gerard turning to a schizo? Poor Mikey *single tear*August 26th, 2010 at 06:27am
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Wo0t: new commenter! <3
I will update tonight or tomorrow.August 26th, 2010 at 04:16am -
AWWWW :(
updateee. please? <3August 26th, 2010 at 03:53am -
Manda: Wait, do you mean the chapter or the comments? Ha.August 26th, 2010 at 03:20am
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That could've been explained very badly, but you did a great job of it.August 26th, 2010 at 02:45am
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Vesperus: Mikey let it slip. BWAHAHHHAHHAHA. Now you guys have to see if he denies it to Gee's face or if he rolls with it. <3
Manda: Yepppp....August 25th, 2010 at 05:16pm -
uhhh.... DAMN CLIFFHANGER!!!!August 25th, 2010 at 04:18pm
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YEA NEW CHAPTER!!!!^^
Go Gee!!
That is always a fun way to get info out of someone
Mikey certainly has gotten himself into a situation
Good or Bad, I wonder!
Loved it XD
Another update pleaseAugust 25th, 2010 at 01:07pm -
**HUZZAH. Speeeeeeliong Nazi. :PAugust 25th, 2010 at 07:33am
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Very interesting. Next chapter is going up VERY SOON BECAUSE I FINALLY GOT MY ASS INTO GEAR! Hazzah.August 25th, 2010 at 06:52am
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Btw, I was wondering why you were talking about me giving you an idea or whatever in the Author's Note, and then I was gonna comment on your page asking you, but I saw it.
I don't know why I had to tell you this,
But I had to XDAugust 25th, 2010 at 02:08am -
Thank you for, er, thanking me?
Sorry the comment is so late. I am subscribed to your story, but for some reason Mibba didn't tell me you updated.
I found out 'cause, like usual, I was trolling around for waycests other than my own, and I saw this.
Okay.
Onto the actual story comment, yeah?
Chapter Eleven: Haha. Douchefuck. I’m using that.
I think the way Gerard told Mikey about the Vanessa thing is a bit unrealistic, but amazingly funny (and, actually, when it comes to these guys, probably realistic XD you know?)
“Who wants Mikey babies” O.O … *slowly raises hand*
I like the way you portray Mikey. I mean, he is 15, so the weird-o, kinda jerky, geek you’ve touched on, especially in this chapter, is accurate. But I also like to think that, especially with Gerard as an older brother, and growing up in Jersey, he acted older than he was sometimes, which you’ve definitely touched on. Bravo.
I love that Gerard carved in Mikey’s initials. Exquisite.
Ooooooh! Now the kitty thing has even more depth! (I don’t know if you meant it to, but it does in my mind)
his night terrors revolved around the walking dead, mostly bleeding heavily and dismembered, blood flowing from their mouths like foam from a rabid dog's.
You made me orgasm with that part. I’m so fucking twisted.
*this is me marrying your mind*
was sis thirty I think you mean “six” dear XD
Psh. You’re so dumb Gerard. You two are meant to be together. Gah.
Chapter Twelve: Garfield reference? Wtf? XD
burning my tongue in the process. I told you it's Monday You is a funny, funny lady.
Ohmygerard, that “Hug back” part was so cute. For some reason, it made me think of Fullmetal Alchemist. Perfect :D
Mikey as a ‘kitty’ reminds me of this waycest idea I had. You’ve inspired me to actually finish it. Thank you X3
said, Don't you forgot the beginning quotation.
Totally reminds me of my high school. I have to go back there in a week. Fuck.
Awwwwww! Poor Mikey! I’ll take care of you!
O.O
Awwwwww! Poor Gerard! Don’t think that!
Another chapter dedication? Shit, yeah :D
No problemo. I’m happy to help.
FOR THE GOOD OF WAYCEST EVERYWHERE!!!!!!!!11!!!!!1!!!!one!!!!1!!!!!!August 25th, 2010 at 01:31am
Oh, Noes! Why are you depressed puddin'?