This was an incredibly sweet idea for a story. Congratulations on your adaptation of the image, I don't think I realized how difficult it would be until after I had assigned it to you. Thank you for the entry :)
Relation to stimulus: 9 Storyline: 7.5 Grammar and punctuation: 7 Language used: 8 Credibility: 6 Emotive: 7
Relation to stimulus: 9
Storyline: 7.5
Grammar and punctuation: 7
Language used: 8
Credibility: 6
Emotive: 7