cant wait 4 more!!
April 24th, 2011 at 06:41pm
Heaven Help You - Comments
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Yay! She saved him... Can't wait to see what he says... Update soon.March 8th, 2011 at 08:51am
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AddMarch 8th, 2011 at 12:25am
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I could have sworn I commented before...Huh.
Anyway! First of all: Asylums = Awesome set for an awesome story. Second of all, I love all the characters. They're so diverse, but alike (I just made no sense) but anyway, I absolutely love this story :)March 7th, 2011 at 03:19am -
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O.O Update soon please. I wanna know who saved him. Thank God hes not dead. ^.^March 3rd, 2011 at 10:37pm
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awwwMarch 3rd, 2011 at 10:21pm
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awwwMarch 3rd, 2011 at 10:20pm
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First off I love the layout! It goes along the story really well.
I only read two chapters since I dont have time to read it all, but I can honesty say I'm hook. This is different from anything I had read, which is good. And sorry this is a short comment :( But I really do like this story, I can tell its going to be really good, will read more later.
Overall great story :)March 3rd, 2011 at 09:49pm -
Dnt kill him please! DXMarch 3rd, 2011 at 08:57pm
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Hm... this is very interesting. I hope to find out why he killed the girl at the start of the story among other things. Good job. :)February 21st, 2011 at 11:27pm
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Wow. Okay, first of all, this was complete and utter madness. Second, I only have one complaint and that's about the layout. I'd suggest getting a gray background and keeping the rest of it like it is. I dunno, to me, it makes the story seem a bit messy. Anyways, like I said, this was complete and utter madness. Your details are mind boggling - it makes you feel like you're right there, looking at the crime scene and what he did. It leaves a tons of questions unanswered, though. Why did he do it? Did he claim that some sort of higher being told him to do this? Hmmm. I'll have to continue reading to find out :D But right now, since I'm a bit busy, I can't continue reading; however, I'll be subbing :] Lovely job! <3December 15th, 2010 at 02:27am
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Wonderful job, as always (:
I'm too curious about what Renee is diagnosed with as wel!!!!!! GAH SO CURIOUS!!!!
lol anyway, loved this chapter ;) Update soon!!! <3December 10th, 2010 at 01:10am -
I really want to kno what she is diagnosed with!
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Poor Jonathon!! He went completely insane seeing someone else doing his hand motions. D;
But I'm not going to stop doing them. Lol.
I love this story :DDDD please at more soon!!! <3December 8th, 2010 at 11:02pm -
Love it. Add moreDecember 8th, 2010 at 02:33pm
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That is amazingly written you could feel the intensity of his ocd and his thoughts are very well written. update soon.December 8th, 2010 at 09:02am
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Since reading your story, I have picked up a few habits:
1. counting everything i see
2. Tapping my fingers the same way as Jonathon.
XDD No joke, I've begun to do that. It's actually quite relaxing (:
Anyway, I LOVED the update!! Poor Robbie though D: BethAnn doesn't seem too nice >.>
Can't wait for you to update!! :DDDecember 8th, 2010 at 01:11am -
So I only read two chapters, but really, it's amazing! The emotion behind this is fenominal. It's... wow. Gosh, you have a way with writing, don't you?
I love the obsessivness and how well you pull it off.December 7th, 2010 at 05:46am -
This is reaaaallly good. I like the OCD-ness; I even start tapping my fingers on my leg lol
I was waiting for him to do something to the nurse or Renee, but he didn't which is a relief.
Please continue! Update soon!!! :D
*subscribes*December 6th, 2010 at 04:12am
