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  • a falling star;

    a falling star; (100)

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    I really like this story, it was very sad though :(
    August 19th, 2010 at 06:12pm
  • the redhead's cho

    the redhead's cho (100)

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    OH MY GOSH! I like the short chapters. They work well for a flow and also give the reader time to recover and not burst out crying by the end.
    July 29th, 2010 at 07:11am
  • Call.Me.Ella.

    Call.Me.Ella. (100)

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    Awww... a cute story but a sad story. Very poetic though, I like the way you write. Amazing job :)
    July 28th, 2010 at 09:21pm
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