I thought that was good. Like Bones; said, I like how you were talking to your camera, and not about it. That was a unique and creative thing to do in my opinion, and you wrote it well.
July 25th, 2012 at 07:53pm
I really enjoyed this. It was adorable, short, sweet.
I like how you directed it towards your camera, instead of just talking about it.
You used the perfect words, and I didn't find any problems with grammar.
Great job.