700 Feet in the Air - Comments

This was a great story!
It was so sweet! You had great description that I could picture the setting
It was really sweet and I could understand why Gabe would run out.
I loved how you brought the story back to the cliff
and how you made the spot they met the spot they came together.
Very cute and very well done.

i like the opening to ur story! it really good!
i hope u won ! even if u dont it was worth reading!