Memories and Rememberance - Comments

it'll make more sense later:)

So is this how she died in the first place? I'm kinda confused, did he actually kill her or did the gang kill her with the train?

lol but i have no idea what to put in. there are definitely going to be a few more chapters to explain some more, but after that I don't know.

This seems kinda sad cause I can see an end coming and I don't want it to end!! Maybe you should throw something new in the mix to get it going. lol

lol thank you so much! :) that really means a lot to me

I love this!! Usually I always comment but, haha, I haven't had a lot of time to read. Like I said I love this. It feels so disconnected and confusing which I love since it has me coming back for more and thinking up all kinds of possibilties.

And, of course, you can use the quote. Since its not actually mine, anyone can use it. lol Knock yourself out!

lol you hope what lasts?

I just hope it lasts :\

gracias:))

Better! It was much easier to follow in this chapter :)

I'm interested to see how this will all work out. Great story!

thank you guys:)) it means a lot. I'll make the dialoge less and confusing and I'll try to make the rest less confusion but no promises- I'm a little confused myself :)

So far, this is amazing. At a few different times I got a little confused, and there were some points where I didn't really understand who was talking, but I think I figured it out soon enough.

I agree with Komaki; this is extremely intriguing. It pulls you in and doesn't let go.
I can hardly wait to see more. ♥

I like this a lot. Only thing I could say is that I had a hard time following who was speaking during the dialogue portions...Other than that, this is wonderful! I like that you're writing is sort of dreamy itself. Really adds to the story :)

Oh, and p.s. - I'm the same way. I promise myself every chapter I won't write an author's note and then I do....

thank you:) and cool quote...mind if i use it in my story?

The beginning is really intriguing, I think I'll stick around and see what's to come.