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ahhh i would LOVE if this story was continued :)

I know this is really unlikely of me of all people, but I just have to say ONE thing'
intense.

hahhahha
I don't know what it is about Parker, but I don't like her... attitude, I guess, and I feel sorry for her that that's the way her life goes,
and I know what it is about Jack that I don't like... the fact he's an asshole.
hahaha

But overall I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH THIS haha
Update when you can :)

ps; was this the big bang that you were referring to when you didn't know whether to keep it slow or get right into it? that they slept together! :O hahaha. I have a feeling this is going to get a little more gritty though haha

WHAT a tool. hahah
What's Jacko's problemo?
Can't wait for more and hopefully parker running him over with that beautiful porshe of hers lol

Oh and I think Alex got a thing for her.

Omg that was awesome. Although I doubt he would be really this mean. Everything was cool until he called her slut to her face. Wish you didn't leave the sex scene out though.

D:
why is jack so mean!

You are right, Jack really isn't going to be very nice! Haha.
But there's something about this story that I absolutely love!
:D

HAHAHAHAH
geez Jack, you're so nice! LOL, JUST KIDDING! you're a fucking asshole :|

hahahahhaha
oh Tori, I already love this one.

Did poor Jacky just suffer from a rough breakup or a pole being shoved up his ass or something? :) I sympathise with him... :/ yeah right. you don't treat perfectly nice girls like that haha

Uhm, I honestly have no idea what's going to happen but I sure as hell can't wait to find out.
Hey, asshole Jack. I would like you to exit the building only to return when you decide to be nice k?
I don't like your attitude.
As for Alex, good job. You're a pretty nice dude ;]

im excited for this!

I actually want to slap this story Jack Barakat! lol
Can't wait to see where you're heading with this one.

This sure is an interesting start.

wow jack wow.....
Hmmm i liked the chapter!
awww no happy ending! D: hahaha oh wells

Moody Jack Barakat? Well hmmm?

I liket...subscribing...riiiiiight nooooow

i like this!
*subsribes*
yay i love me some jack barakat

I'm definitley excited for this and definitley subscribing! :)
i am really glad you're writing a Jack story...i missed reading them. it's been way too long haha
I did not expect Jack to be such a bitch like that...you don't knock a girl over and just leave her there but i'm sure he had his reasons; he would never act like that if he was in a good mood. That just isn't him. lol
The first chapter was really interesting...this looks like it's going to be a great story. can't wait to find out what happens!
<3 Kelsey

HOW RUDE! hahaha
I'm sure Jack had his reasons to be shitty and not in the mood to be around people, but you don't just knock some girl to the ground and leave her there in the dirt and then be rude when they try to get your attention. Pffffft. haha

As sad as I am about CGs finishing up, I'm kind of excited for this :)

ps; how embarrassing if it wasn't Jack that dropped the phone and it was meant to be Alex or something haha, but from the descriptions I guessed Alex and Zack were with the fans and Jack was the arrogant one? hahaha

YES I LOVE THIS. FINISH CALIFORNIA GIRLS ASAP. hhaha lol wow