The Darkest of Night - Comments

I really loved this. And you did get the emotion across.
Just one thing. The guy who teased her into smoking that cigarette changes from JASON to JACOB.
Just thought you should know
But its still a great story :]

Alright, so first of all, I really liked this.
The idea was very, very original, and I think in it's own way that it fit the song well.
I also found it very inspiring in the way that something terrible changed Noah for the better. I don't know how to explain it, but that idea just worked well. If that makes sense, I hope?
There were only a few spelling and grammar errors, so it was really no big deal.
This was a wonderful entry. :]