Don't Let the Sun Set - Comments

I liked it, and I already told you my feelings on the story

when I read your entry, I have to say I was disappointed. I don't want to put words in my co-judge's mouth, but it's safe to say that both of us wanted to read and judge something realistic and inspired, but this entry of yours just isn't good enough. a relationship between two people of the same gender shouldn't mean that how they feel and why needs be any different to what two people of the opposite genders feel, and your writing communicated the exact opposite. the characters are unrealistic and fake. I couldn't identify with them, the storyline bland and the dialogue between them embarrassing. I'm not sure that you fully understood that your entry was supposed to be original, either.

Oh my god i loved it! Sooo cute and sad and touching. <3